The Fort

RP Burke

Publisher: Xlibris Pages: 156 Price: (paperback) $19.99 ISBN: 9781984561923 Reviewed: February, 2019 Author Website: Visit »

The summer of 1968 is a time of personal growth for one 12-year-old who must face his fears in RP Burke’s novel, The Fort.

Jackson “Jack” O’Malley looks forward to a summer of playing baseball, hanging out with neighborhood friends, and exploring the nearby woods. Soon, Jack’s 13-year-old cousin Elbert arrives to spend the summer. Elbert’s father died in a recent car accident and Elbert is struggling with his grief. Still, he’s game for anything – until he and Jack are confronted in the woods by a man with a gun and Elbert becomes determined to find out what the man is up to, dragging reluctant Jack along. The mission soon turns deadly, and Jack must act quickly—before he loses his nerve.

Although the narrative is easy to read, it presents several issues. First, the boys’ adventure requires suspending all disbelief. (As they crack an important case, the boys are portrayed as being smarter than the police department and the Secret Service combined, among other improbabilities.)

Additionally, the author’s doggedly descriptive writing style quickly wears thin: “…Jack, who liked to keep moving during the game [of kick the can] had run completely around Dana’s house before crawling behind the Allens’ Ford station wagon parked in the street. So when Gary spied some movement from Judy and Dana in his front yard behind the hedges and ran behind them, Jack saw his opportunity to make a run for the telephone pole and took off from behind the car…”

It’s also unclear why “the fort” is in the title, since Jack’s treehouse fort has little significance in the story. The target audience is equally unclear. While it seems most appropriate for middle grade readers, the book isn’t labeled as such.

Tweens may relate to Jack’s angst at playing in the baseball championship or deciding if a neighborhood girl is flirting with him, etc. Even these readers, however, are likely to find Jack’s heroic exploits rather preposterous, as will a general audience.

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